Monday 7 October 2013

100 Word Challenge

Last week in Literacy, we wrote some fantastic 100 word challenges. 

Our stimulus for this writing was 'His yellow eyes...'




Please look in the comments section of this post for some amazing examples of our work.

Mr. Lee

16 comments:

  1. His yellow eyes were very scary they were as vicous as a tiger those yellow lokking eyes lokked as vicious as anything in the world.

    They were very very viciousi can't evan look at themthere that scary it looked like a very vicious cat witch i don't like at all.

    I don't like vicious animals there scary really really scary i was relly scared when i first layed my eye on it.

    Those yellow eyes are really scary i don't want to see them again ever again i am really fritend i'm defently scared of these yellow creepy eyes a lot.

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  2. Its a good job you made a 100 word challenge because i can now use them in my big write.
    from Jay

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  3. His yellow eyes , they stared at me there was something different about this cat . So I walked down the alley on the next road bit, but there was the cat sitting on the road . So I ran to the other one . It was there, I was starting to think it was an evil witch . Then I thought what am I thinking it probaly just wants a owner and a home . So I took it home with me, and gave it food and a bed but in the morning the cat was gone I wondered if it was with wanting some good food . Jess

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  4. Here is my 100 word challange


    His yellow eyes lit up in the moonlight. Idont know what it was or who it was I just knew it's eyes was so eye catching, it might not be a boy i'm just guessing it could be a girl. Who knows?

    This is one creature you don't want to be messing with and I think it might be a kind of cat becausewhen it gets mad it's fur goes spiky and it's tail sticks up long and stiff it's teeth goes sharp and red please stay away or you will know about it. This is the most dangerous creature ever...

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  5. His yellow eyes , They are horrible snot yellow eyes. they have purple pupils in the middle of them both. They were really hitmatising it really scared me I wish I was somwere else right now but I felt like I needed to stay there was something holding me back and then his eyes got bigger and bigger now I was scared I really wished I was at home drinking hot chocolate now nothing was holding me back but I wanted to be brave so I stayed and I was finaly face to face with a yellow eyed black cat

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  6. His yello eyes are non stop glowing at me. I feel like im trapped. Is it a dog is a tiger I dont know

    He looks scary but his eyes are amazing its like the sun but not that bright should i go in . the sky sky it means nothing bads going to happen is it. I feel scared but not terrified why are the brids flyng so high mabey there scared I dont know. My hands are shaking
    oh I wish my friends was here there brave oh its coming out oh oh its a cat........

    from izzy

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  7. His yellow eyes, they were like two suns staring at me as though it was geting ready to pounce. Maybe. Maybe it was a Lynx. The bright balls of yellow scared me, I was petrified.

    It had beautiful white pearls (teeth) as though it was about to try and eat me.

    The trees were bent over him to protect the low flying birds from his grasp.

    He had carved claw marks into the tree.

    I felt like running away but his eyes paralized me

    Why were the birds flying so high? Are they scared? Should I be scared even more?

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  8. His eyes watch me more i feell sceded then his eyes going side to side the his wisckz twiting sife to side hs tai long as as a car his yellow eyes the sun .
    amelia

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  9. My 100 word challenge.

    His yellow eyes, they stare at you with joy. They glow in the dark, he moves silently with no noise at all. Everybody calls him the yellow eyed cat. It's because his yellow eyes stare at you. Nobodys scared of him. He has soft and silky fur that you cant resist. Theonly thing thats hes scared of is children under 10 becausethey swing him round the living-room by his tail. I don't know how the cat survives! He also has another name that is: Soft kitty eyes, even though its rather a girls name.

    Will you be soft kitty?

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  10. His eyes glow in the dark and stare out spookily to find his pray.

    His black pearls are starring away at prediters that pass.

    His whiskers are quikley twitching away because he can smell food to eat.

    His yellow eyes stare at you visiously asif you are his enemie.

    His nose starts twitching because he can smell humans or any living things

    He looks evily at you and its like he is gona eat you all up

    morgan

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  11. His yellow eyes ,stared to look they would not stop he was waching my ever move .

    I was pancing to deth what can I deo stay Strang.

    That momter I ran down sters ''get dack to bed now'' ''no no there is a monster out sied'' '' let go have a look'' no no'' '' go back to bed then'' '' ok''...

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  12. His yellow eyes, black furr, green tail, all so dangorous! The tail sprays poisonous arrows!

    When I saw the horrible creature,it looked straight at me,and I looked straight back,with his yellow eyes stairing at me,then he ran away. I went home and found my mum on the sofa, she was watching emmerdale...

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  13. His yellow eyes stared at me I was realy scared of creatcher I dident know what it was it had sharp clows he looked evil because of his scary bright eyes his eyes are scary...

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  14. Mr Lee here is my 100 Word Challenge
    His yellow eyes stared at me with joy.Every where he stepped was so gentle. when
    he made a noise sounded like music to my ears.It was a beautiful sight everythinggentle surrounded him.His fur was so silky smooth his teeth are pearl white but blunt.What ever it was it was beautiful sweet and gentle.It made me think what was it...
    Kieran

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  15. Here ismy 100 word challange


    His yellow eyes...
    were bright creepy so we ran and found a house

    But the yellow eyes followed us and popped out in frontof the window.
    So we locked the kitche doors.

    Later on wecould here digging and we could here the tiels shaking
    so we ran out

    We took a break and one of us guarded us...

    joe

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  16. His yello eyes,...

    They was the brightest thing I ever saw they were beautifull and mastareas everyone loved his big yello glowing eyes.

    He could see in the night like it was the morning this is how he got so yello eyes he never stopped eating karrets every dinner time he had a plate full of karrets for his lunch,the boy would have nothing but...rhys

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